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This is really beautiful. What really stood out for me was your line faster and faster, Idon'tcareIdon'tcareIdon'tcare, before you finally believed it. I don't know why, I just... really liked ...

Movie Theater In the very first line, this is capitalized. It isn't a proper noun, unless you put in the name of this particular movie theater. I really like how ...

Hmm... This is a little hard to understand. I really like the style you've written it in. For I would miss the way She’d tell I think it makes the ...

I think you probably should have put this into lyrical, because, although you WROTE it from mulitple points of view, the poem is from one point of view. Yu still ...

The endings of the first 2 lines sound... a little off. I don't know why.

Ohmygod. This just was really excellent poetry... I wasn't expecting that. I think it made the plot... less mushy, and more fitting to the type of style you chose to ...

The art is good, but you need to ink and color it, AND work on your spelling. :P

They blast any girl or boy that is not thin, preppy, or beautiful. I don't like this line. The rest is pretty good :D

This is a really good poem. I can't exactly see what you are trying to convey here, but the first verse just sounds... really good. I tink maybe because "Make ...

Ack. What. TOO MANY BIG WORDS.

^^^ Onomatopoeia

This is a good poem, but also one of the WEIRDEST ever. I like the strangled by sunbeams line, and the moonbeam line too :D

I. Am. Madly. In. Love. With. Frank. The SIX FOOT TALL BUNNY! Okay. I totally watched that movie like 3 times over and over last night, hahaha. But on your ...

It seems like you used a few words that have... well, gone out ogf style, and it seems you might find a few of them in some really old stuff ...

9/10- Homer ROCKS. But Peter (Family Guy) WHOOPS HOMER'S ASS! (Why it's not a 9/10.) OMG! Another horror movie obssesser. I